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Post by rebeccajane on Aug 12, 2017 1:59:19 GMT
Read it all the way through in one sitting Becca, and you fill it out really well. A lot of the time authors at our level try to be to pacy with the narrative to make it exciting but what we really do is leave it too thin and lose our audience. You don't do that and so you have created a story that really pulls you in. It's stunning, please don't relegate it to some story sites, publish it so everyone gets a chance to read it, and I mean everyone.
Anna... Wow... Seriously, wow... Thank you for that, I wish I had a better response but that really caught me off guard. I'm usually much better at words. I've seriously considered publishing it, at least in the last 4-5 months. I've shared it with some friends locally, and they are advising me of the same... Still, just wow. Thank you again. Becca
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Post by rebeccajane on Aug 12, 2017 2:01:29 GMT
Becca the best thing about your story is I have got go know you, not just as a writer, as a person and a friend as well. PS Other friendships have also developed with other writers on this site as well Agreed wholeheartedly Sam. Had I not shared this I'd have never gotten to know you either, or been invited into this forum. Both of which I am thankful for, it's given me a chance to do more than just leave a comment to some of the authors that I have a great deal of respect for. So its been a really cool experience Becca
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